Not bad for early work. Nice little video gamey loop. Keep at it!
Not bad for early work. Nice little video gamey loop. Keep at it!
Any spisific ideas for me to improve? also thanks for 3 stars, I was expecting a 2 or even blammed
I feel as though it kept building up to a breakdown only for it to not really go anywhere until the 4-minute mark, which made it feel more repetitive than what might've been your intention. I noticed there is a melody in certain places and it was unfittingly simple compared to the complex beat, but I think it kinda works in a juxtaposition-y way.
Overall it's pretty good.
Okay, this is epic.
Review
This song is nothing more than a bunch of random instruments being played at once. These instruments don't go well together which is why the song was so bad.
this is a LOOP not a song
Nice
It's a good remix of a great song, but it seemed too much like it, I think you could've changed it some more so it would seem less like just a loop.
It's indeed very indifferent from the original song, but I wanted to capture the 8-bit feeling the original had. If it ain't broken - don't fix it. ;)
Thanks for reviewing!
It's weird.
But it starts to get very annoying when you play it too much, the melody didn't change much throughout the song. You could've done more with it.
Doesn't even sound like hip hop.
Your voice sounds high pitched and you're still whispering. The lyrics were sang like gibberish. After the first 30 seconds you start to sing offbeat. You should use different instruments in the music, too.
its gangsta rap not hiphop
Much to improve on
You sang whispered, the BPM was much too fast, the lyrics were OK but it was hard to understand since you were singing so quietly.
just listen you homo
Possibly the best song on the portal!
Both this and the loop version of this is in many flashes, it's one of the most famous songs on here. This song has made history!
I love videogames especially old school games. I've played almost every classic and I love making parody's of it in sprite animations. If you do not like Sprite animations please go watch actual drawings on another place or at least give it a chance.
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