Chdonga's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wariette]

Now THAT'S a woman!

The cigar makes it perfect

Marklikeart responds:

hot mama!

[Blue Coin Pixel Collection 1]

Review

The character design is nice and original, but many of the sprites look sloppy. More specifically the ones in the middle.

None of the sprites have a real light source, and the palette you chose looks more like the MS Paint default colors. If they're not, they're still very unpleasant to look at.

Really, I think if you used more vibrant colors for all of them, it would improve the entire thing.

empireomega responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'll work on applying your suggestions to my art.

[In The Neo Green Hill Zone]

Review

By resizing it ans saving it as .jpg, you ruined the quality of the image as pixel art. Considering that you admittedly didn't make the sprites or the background, there's not much else to criticize about this picture.

TheThirdMarioBro96 responds:

well then WHAT THE HELL DO YOU SUGGEST, if you're so smart? After all, I'm pretty new at this

[Sonic and Shadow's Rivalry]

Bad.

You rely to much on the line tools. Without proper shading this makes the object look jagged and artificial. Shadow is not grey, he's black. Neither of them have perfect circle noses either. And the picture would've at least been better quality if you saved it as .png.

sonimatic responds:

THEY WERE THE ONLY COLORS I HAD!!! SHUT UP ALREADY!!!

[LINK!!!]

Awful.

You seem to have not given Link a definite light source and by making the entire background black it just made less sense. It's shaded so poorly that it looks flat, and the face looks nothing like Link's face.

sonimatic responds:

I really don't like you.

[Sonic art]

Lazily done.

His arms aren't properly aligned, his face is lopsided, and he doesn't have a tail.
Sonic's torso is supposed to be round, not whatever shape you made it. His fists shouldn't be a perfect circle either. And the way you placed his thumbs, well basically you gave him two left hands. You should really practice drawing Sonic more.

sonimatic responds:

SHUT UP ALREADY!

[Classic Sonic: GONE WRONG!!!]

It doesn't look like Sonic. At all.

The censor bar took up so much space on his hand that it looked like his hand was a penis, rather than him lifting up his middle finger. The arms are not aligned and his right hand has four fingers when Sonic has five. His torso makes no sense with his legs and his face. His torso is pointing left while the rest of him is facing forward. Also his ears and his torso spikes are missing.

Just like some of your other art, you used the line tool too much which worsened the picture.

sonimatic responds:

F**K you. I thought I BLOCKED you!

[DANCING BANANA LIKES CEREAL!!!]

Amateurish.

It barely looks like a banana. It's shaped more like a boomerang than a banana. The way you shaded it doesn't go well with its crudely drawn limbs. You shouldn't rely so much on the shape tool either. It makes the image look jagged.

The image quality is also bad. This is because it is saved as a .jpg, rather than a .png. Next time you draw something, be sure to save it as a .png.

sonimatic responds:

SHUT UP!

[Mac v.s Henchmen! by Chat-man]

Getting there.

What you should fix are the buildings, two are tilted to the side. You should lower the cross on Mac's face, it's too high.

ratchili responds:

Thanks but those 2 buildings are SUPPOSED to be tilted. They collapsed on each other.