Chdonga's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Debugged]

Not bad if this is your first game. The jump needs to be tweaked a little bit. Sometimes the second jump doesn't respond and the jump arc is too low.

EDIT: Almost forgot, if you're gonna have the player click on objects you should always map movement to the WASD keys.

Just keep at it, my man.

k9 responds:

Thanks for the review! I'm gonna make a little update, adressing some of the criticisms I've gotten from my freinds playtesting, reviews I've gotten, and some stuff I was told on 4chan, so thanks for this information, and thanks for playing!

[DOTMAN]

It's definitely not the worst game I've ever played.
The jumping is very floaty which really hurts the overall experience. The graphics are a lot worse than the thumbnail and the achievement icons would imply. I also found myself randomly dying from nothing after the third waves.
If you simply fixed the jumping and the hitboxes, this would be a much better game.

hicham responds:

i'm on it! :)

[Simple Sonic Game]

Simple, yet good.

Even though this game isn't the nicest looking, it's very fun. I liked how as you go through, the stage moves faster and faster. The only thing that could be improved is the sound quality and you could add a background. But if you want to make it more of a challenge, you could add more hazards, like moving spikes or power ups that slow Sonic down or speed him up.

[the gun builder V.1 Beta]

A decent first flash.

The parts of the gun aren't very detailed, the bodies are just differently sized rectangles. Everything should be two or three times bigger and some background music wouldn't hurt.

[Design your zombie game]

Bad.

4 is not enough parameters to edit. You should also be able to edit the reaction time, the graphics and the music, that would make it more like a design game. It would make more sense to just click the mouse to shoot instead of needing to hold it down. If it is a horizontal shooter, the background makes no sense, because the background is for a top-down shooter. Also the Hero should be able to walk around the stage.

[Choco Tetris]

Not very good.

This game contains lots of glitches. The majority of the time, the blocks go off the screen. The music and sound effect is annoying. It really didn't seem like a chocolate themed Tetris, but Tetris with different colored blocks.

[Canabalt]

Great

The game is great because it's so simple. The graphics are amazing for a four or five color limit. And even the music is good.

[Lastman]

Challenging.

This game is so nerve wracking, but that's what makes it so fun. There were some parts in the stage that seemed like the run button didn't work but I guess that was intentional. This was definitely the hardest game on NG.

[platform tutorial :D]

Pretty decent

however there were a few things you could've explained further, you should have called the movie clip a movie clip instead of an MC in case someone didn't know what MC stood for. You should have explained certain parts of code so it will be easier to edit them.