Chdonga's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic and Shadow's Rivalry]

Bad.

You rely to much on the line tools. Without proper shading this makes the object look jagged and artificial. Shadow is not grey, he's black. Neither of them have perfect circle noses either. And the picture would've at least been better quality if you saved it as .png.

sonimatic responds:

THEY WERE THE ONLY COLORS I HAD!!! SHUT UP ALREADY!!!

[LINK!!!]

Awful.

You seem to have not given Link a definite light source and by making the entire background black it just made less sense. It's shaded so poorly that it looks flat, and the face looks nothing like Link's face.

sonimatic responds:

I really don't like you.

[Sonic art]

Lazily done.

His arms aren't properly aligned, his face is lopsided, and he doesn't have a tail.
Sonic's torso is supposed to be round, not whatever shape you made it. His fists shouldn't be a perfect circle either. And the way you placed his thumbs, well basically you gave him two left hands. You should really practice drawing Sonic more.

sonimatic responds:

SHUT UP ALREADY!

[Riolu]

Needs much work.

Your Riolu is quite disproportionate. A Riolu's torso is skinny and its hips are wide, you made his chest wide and his hip skinny. His arms are supposed to be long and thin, not wide. Riolu's legs don't bend like a human's, they are supposed to bend backwards, like a dog's legs. He also doesn't have a tuft of hair on his head, but I can let that slide.

Overall, if this is your first time drawing Riolu, it's okay, but it also looks like you didn't have a picture to refer to.

[Classic Sonic: GONE WRONG!!!]

It doesn't look like Sonic. At all.

The censor bar took up so much space on his hand that it looked like his hand was a penis, rather than him lifting up his middle finger. The arms are not aligned and his right hand has four fingers when Sonic has five. His torso makes no sense with his legs and his face. His torso is pointing left while the rest of him is facing forward. Also his ears and his torso spikes are missing.

Just like some of your other art, you used the line tool too much which worsened the picture.

sonimatic responds:

F**K you. I thought I BLOCKED you!

[DANCING BANANA LIKES CEREAL!!!]

Amateurish.

It barely looks like a banana. It's shaped more like a boomerang than a banana. The way you shaded it doesn't go well with its crudely drawn limbs. You shouldn't rely so much on the shape tool either. It makes the image look jagged.

The image quality is also bad. This is because it is saved as a .jpg, rather than a .png. Next time you draw something, be sure to save it as a .png.

sonimatic responds:

SHUT UP!

[Witch In The Sunlight~]

Needs much improvement.

The witch's proportions are nothing like how she's supposed to look. She's completely flat and you didn't bother removing those stray black outlines on her. Also the witch had five fingers, not four. The background is completely empty other than the sun which looks more like a yellow ball with red spikes around it. I don't understand why there's blood on the ocean and what that light blue patch under the sun is.

[Mac v.s Henchmen! by Chat-man]

Getting there.

What you should fix are the buildings, two are tilted to the side. You should lower the cross on Mac's face, it's too high.

ratchili responds:

Thanks but those 2 buildings are SUPPOSED to be tilted. They collapsed on each other.