Chdonga's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Riolu]

Needs much work.

Your Riolu is quite disproportionate. A Riolu's torso is skinny and its hips are wide, you made his chest wide and his hip skinny. His arms are supposed to be long and thin, not wide. Riolu's legs don't bend like a human's, they are supposed to bend backwards, like a dog's legs. He also doesn't have a tuft of hair on his head, but I can let that slide.

Overall, if this is your first time drawing Riolu, it's okay, but it also looks like you didn't have a picture to refer to.

[Classic Sonic: GONE WRONG!!!]

It doesn't look like Sonic. At all.

The censor bar took up so much space on his hand that it looked like his hand was a penis, rather than him lifting up his middle finger. The arms are not aligned and his right hand has four fingers when Sonic has five. His torso makes no sense with his legs and his face. His torso is pointing left while the rest of him is facing forward. Also his ears and his torso spikes are missing.

Just like some of your other art, you used the line tool too much which worsened the picture.

sonimatic responds:

F**K you. I thought I BLOCKED you!

[DANCING BANANA LIKES CEREAL!!!]

Amateurish.

It barely looks like a banana. It's shaped more like a boomerang than a banana. The way you shaded it doesn't go well with its crudely drawn limbs. You shouldn't rely so much on the shape tool either. It makes the image look jagged.

The image quality is also bad. This is because it is saved as a .jpg, rather than a .png. Next time you draw something, be sure to save it as a .png.

sonimatic responds:

SHUT UP!

[Witch In The Sunlight~]

Needs much improvement.

The witch's proportions are nothing like how she's supposed to look. She's completely flat and you didn't bother removing those stray black outlines on her. Also the witch had five fingers, not four. The background is completely empty other than the sun which looks more like a yellow ball with red spikes around it. I don't understand why there's blood on the ocean and what that light blue patch under the sun is.

[Mac v.s Henchmen! by Chat-man]

Getting there.

What you should fix are the buildings, two are tilted to the side. You should lower the cross on Mac's face, it's too high.

ratchili responds:

Thanks but those 2 buildings are SUPPOSED to be tilted. They collapsed on each other.

[My current team.]

Redo it.

You need to redo all of them, because none of them look like what they're supposed to be. The pear looks like a green squash, no strawberry has that many seeds on it, Meta Knight's sword looks like a yellow stick. And none of them are actually holding their weapons.

ratchili responds:

FUCKYOU.

[Pixel guys.]

Not pixel art.

It's too basic to be called pixel art. None of the three are shaded at at all. If you used MS paint, you used the default colors. The only one that looks right is Pac-Man.

ratchili responds:

It is pixel art!

[metaknight]

Barely looks like him

The biggest mistake is the color of his skin and wings, it's dark purple, not black. His shoes should be white, his cape should be wider and be purple with a white trim. His mask is too large, it's big but shouldn't cover his entire face. And his sword, you made it look like a pitch fork. The details of the mas was good, however. It's supposed to be white but the black still looks good. The eye piece wasn't the width of his mask though.

ratchili responds:

It's a black'n'white sketch retard.