Chdonga's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Elf girl]

You've got a good handle on color for a beginner.
Consider doing some side-view sprites before doing a frontal view. The sooner you break the habit of drawing the characters with hands behind their back the better your art will become.

koupip responds:

tfw 4years since i started pixel art but still beginner ;;. thank you for the tip ill work on that for my next sprite

[Panty]

I'm really mixed on this. I also like the outfit, and the shading is very nice. The awkward head & neck placement and the overall square body is offputting though.

[Roll's summer 2019]

That's one hell of a glow up! You've improved greatly over the course of 10 years!!

[Starmage Olin]

Cute character. I like the color scheme but I think you should try to use a uniform-colored outline so they stand out better from the background. I hope to see more of your work in the future.

NullToxicity responds:

Thanks, I'll definitely mess around with that in the future and see if I like it :)

[SpriteDraw: Frog Child]

I love the child.

Sketching1Star responds:

Thanks! They're a bit grumpy but I love them too

[MLSS King K. Rool Sprites Sheet.]

The poses feel rather stiff and restrained. Even moreso if you compare it to official MLSS sprites.
I think if you did more with the head it would make K Rool's personality really show. Like, maybe have his big eye bulge out more when he takes damage, or have his mouth gape wide open in certain frames. And he should have a taunt frame where he faces the camera smiling after throwing his crown.

There's a lot of personality in what you have so far, so just keep on spriting!

[animé]

I like how the chromatic aberration/vhs filter is rather subdued. It looked like actual cels at a quick glance. The creatures are adorable too. The one on the necklace is fine, but I think the other three glimmers would be better on the characters' eyes or just not there at all. They feel kinda randomly placed, in my opinion. Nonetheless I think this is a really cool drawing!

[Cockatrice]

A fine little flying animation. The shading reminds me of a DOS adventure game. I think the snakes are a little stiff, but the eyebrow movement is nice.

Sketching1Star responds:

Thanks. I'll keep that feedback in mind since I could always update it later

[noodle]

Really cute aesthetic. And the amount of detail put into the vehicle & environment really makes the picture stand out!